Good first attempt at making a video. I know you suffered at the hands of poor equipment!
I think you have made improvements to the video which I am pleased to see. However to improve it even further you need to consider the following points:
Some of the transitions/fades are rather slow and you are left with picture in picture and also sound. This unfortunately looks unprofessional.
I think you could have perhaps shot more footage to cover the main piece to camera.
I would like to see your 'biggest inspirations,' either from a photograph of them or of some other video footage.
You don't need to caption you putting on make up as it is clear what you are doing.
Please make changes as soon as possible. Good attempt at a rather tricky project.
Good first attempt at making a video. I know you suffered at the hands of poor equipment!
ReplyDeleteI think you have made improvements to the video which I am pleased to see. However to improve it even further you need to consider the following points:
Some of the transitions/fades are rather slow and you are left with picture in picture and also sound. This unfortunately looks unprofessional.
I think you could have perhaps shot more footage to cover the main piece to camera.
I would like to see your 'biggest inspirations,' either from a photograph of them or of some other video footage.
You don't need to caption you putting on make up as it is clear what you are doing.
Please make changes as soon as possible. Good attempt at a rather tricky project.